Tuesday, 24 February 2015

Journalism 2 Task 1a) Develop ideas and a concept for your digital publishing product- Feedback


  • The feedback I received was mostly positive than negative, but I need some areas that needed to be improve such as not forgetting to target my primary audience which meant I needed to focus on the whole unit, and not only one part. For an example, I shouldn’t only think about the content side of the blog and what’s going to be in it, but I should also think about how I'm going distributed to my audience and the media side. 
  • My feed backers mention that I need to careful think about what idea I was going to create, and I have decide I'm going to design a blog reviewing luxury cars. However, my main idea was to review a TV programme called Top Gear which was allow contained super cars, but the feedback that I got was main suggesting I needed to choose the cars I wanted to review. This would mean that I would write my true, and personal opinions about the cars used. 
  • Furthermore, the feedback also allows me to think about what I would write about the cars, and the reason why I choose them. 
  • The feedback that I got allowed me to understand that I needed to do research on the cars that I will be reviewing, and giving information about. For an example, I can attend Mercedes- Benz car shows to get more accurate information the vehicles, and it will also allow me to get a more range of opinions for the cars. 
  • This idea sounds much more realistic of me, because I have access to both vehicles that I'm planning to use which is the Mercedes- Benz S-Class and the C-Class. 
  • Another reason why I feel confident with the idea is, because I have permission to be using the cars so I would be getting my own pictures, which means I wouldn't copyright issues with my blog. 
  • Overall, the feedback was helpful, because it allowed me to understand the realistic side of the idea that I had. For an example, I was planning to go to a Mercedes-Benz car show and just simply get pictures, and write about them. However, I wasn't considering the copyright issues that I could face and the low percentage of control that I had over the cars. For an example, if I wanted to change the picture and get another shot I might have the chance of not finding the same car again. 

1 comment:

  1. you have written an adequate commentary on the board meeting, but you are not really clear enough on how you will move forward on the basis of the feedback, and elements you took that you might use in your articles.

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